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31-01-2004
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Congratulations on accepting and completing my challenge Purple.

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Quote:
Quack Quack Quack

The other day I saw a duck,
It did not duck, it did not dive the
Other day I saw a duck,
I saw a bird, in the sky the
Other day, time seemed to slide,
I saw a duck, people died, the
Other day I nearly cried, I had no-one left.

Here you enter this picture now,
You feel. I ask you how,
Here you are so sudden now,
Here you are no more.

People come and people go,
The other day I saw a duck,
Who am I now, do you know,
Do you even give a ****?

Mothers cry for those who are gone,
Some have no food, some have a gun,
Who will cry if you have no one?
Who will weep when you’re gone?

Does it matter when we die?
No. It matters why we
Have to Go. This other place,
A soul behind every single face

Think of me, I’ll think of you,
It’s on my list of things to do.
Go to the bank, then think of you,
But wait, I don't have time to think

Of you because, I saw a duck
The other day I saw a duck,
The other day I saw a duck,
Between two slices of bread.


That sure as hell stopped you quacking!

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That brought tears to my eyes ahhGucci. Thank you.

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How about another random poem?
Anyone up to the challenge?...
Now- a poem about a cupcake....

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My Love is True, It's You I'll Chew

Cupcake, cupcake
you are so sweet
I really adore your delectable treat
Your top is pink, your inside's brown
I love those sprinkles
they turn me 'round
Oh how I love thee
cupcake dear
How sad my birthday
comes but once a year


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Who are you?

Do I really know you better than you do? or
Do I only know how you want to be percieved?
Do I know you as you know yourself, do I know you better?
Do I know you at all? Do you know me? Do you?

When I'm gone will you think of me, as I think of you?
Tell me you will think of me, tell me what you will do.
Tell me I that I care you, I will say it too.
'I care for you, I care for you' tell me if its true!

Tell me why I talk so much, why do I talk so much?
For all I want is to look at you, to gaze at you. To feel you.
But fate won't let me have my wish, an oceans in the way.
You talk to me, what do you say?* 'How are you this lovely day?'

Im speechless!

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That's lovely...

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That is a beautiful poem.

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ahhThankyou. I would love to hear anyone elses poetry on this thread. Please don't be discouraged, go for it. I look forward to hearing your poetry. (even if its in Dutch, or any other launguage for that matter)

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Quote:

Je bent prachtig
Je bent mijn held
Je bent waarachtig
mooi, ik smelt.


Quote:
Ik wil je
niet zo'n beetje ook
Ik verlang naar je
niet zo'n beetje ook
Je bent zo mooi
niet zo'n beetje ook
Maar ik ben bang
een beetje maar



okay .. now you translate..

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You are beautifully
You are my hero
You are true well,
I melted.

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Wow!
Great translating and beautiful poem lilliojAnna...

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I long for you,
You are well,
But I am fearfull.

Sorry, very bad translation!

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Quote:
Originally posted by ahhGucci@Jan 31st, 2004 - 10:11 pm
You are beautifully
You are my hero
You are true well,
I melted.
about right..

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Ik wil je
niet zo'n beetje ook
Ik verlang naar je
niet zo'n beetje ook
Je bent zo mooi
niet zo'n beetje ook
Maar ik ben bang
een beetje maar


I want you
not just a little bit
I long for you
not just a little bit
You are so pretty
not just a little
But I'm frightend

Just a little bit

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