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Great poems Annako, I really like the second one.

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purplelucrezia Posted on Mar 5th, 2004 - 5:26 pm
Great poems Annako, I really like the second one.

Thank you, I do to. The emotions attached to the second one are much deeper.

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i didnt know we had a poetry corner here!!!

heres one i wrote in july 2001!!!! long time
actually, i havent been writing poems lately...ive moved on i guess....

by the way, we have some real talent here



When friends become strangers

The moment -- the moment of suffocating silence
That comes out of just another painful memory.
The repercussion of building revulsion between two deceived souls
As they stand on the thin line between being friends, or strangers.
This is not hate, just awe -- anger for what may come…
Tears make subtle paths down the contorted cheeks
As one screams to the other to understand, to believe.
Or maybe just to accept the bitter reality -- and let go.
The hurt increases, for both -- even worse,
Because of the love that is still there, will always be.
For they will understand, they will believe… and they will know
That this is not the end of a beautiful rapport, it is just…
The moment -- the moment when friends become strangers

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annako...beautiful sentiment...i a happy ending....

love yr 2nd one

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i strolled downtown
i roamed the streets
searching for
that familiar beat

the heart of the city
the pulse of the town
it seems the excitement
has somewhat died down

the artists are elsewhere
the masses moved in
it seems that my city
is less than it's been

i stop in a cafe
to seek some relief
and am somewhat surprised
by the strength of my grief

my city is changing
that's certainly clear
and it makes me ponder
'what's left for me here...'

but as i step back
and look all around
i remember "it's the best city
i've ever found"

i ny...





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Nice poem. It seems that everything changes and being able to adapt to that change is a great quality. It seems like you really love NY no matter what.

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Originally posted by model_mom@Apr 6th, 2004 - 1:27 am
Nice poem. It seems that everything changes and being able to adapt to that change is a great quality. It seems like you really love NY no matter what.
i do i do i do...

adapting is not always easy...



i'm trying to accept what i cannot change and change what i cannot accept...

hey, i think that's my new mantra...

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How come you never went to sleep?

Read a post on "Whats on your mind?" that answers my question.

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Originally posted by model_mom@Apr 6th, 2004 - 1:35 am
How come you never went to sleep?
i'm a night owl...

i'm fond of the shadows...

i'm more inspired at night...i can just think more clearly...i'm not distracted by the day...it's free time...

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something funny....


with every move she makes
she makes me smile
she even makes me gargle on my bile

o but i'm a flea
i dont deserve that bee
(it's against our traditions!)


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Funny

Eyes fixed on me
Approximating my reaction?
Measuring my morals?
Funny,
I thought I made myself clear.
An indecisive arm around my waist
Casually enough to be friendly
Low enough to mean more
Funny,
You aren't usually this shy.
When you sigh I know it's up to me
I hate making the first move
But I want this enough to spread a hand over your chest
Funny,
I've never seen you look surprised.
You take my other wrist
And pull me into you
And kiss me with lips still ashy
From your last cigarette.

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hmm...ashy kisses...is that a good thing?>>>

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Hmm...I like it slinky_vagabond.
Great poetry from everyone!

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actually, this is a song....but dont tell anyone!! ninja:




SORRY

I’m standing in the limelight
Accusations pouring in
I try to shut it out but the fingers
Keep pointin’
These ice cold glares to haunt me
And I can hardly breathe

Put your arms around me and take me far away
From this world of pseudo
Saints and blurry days
Someone’s closed his eyes and someone sits and prays
But empty hearts surround me
And the vile is building up
Hate vines still creep over
The walls of where we are

This love won’t last too long
If this is how we’ll go on
There’s nothing in between us
But still we’re far apart
You can say you’re sorry
But still you’ve broken my heart

Everyone’s so panicked
Time is running out
Shoulders once to comfort me
Now shruggin’s all they do

Why don’t you feel my pain
(It’s burned my world to ashes)
Why don’t you listen hard
(Maybe you would hear me cry)
I’ve numbed myself for so long now
(My tears have all run dry)

Why don’t you understand
There’s pleasure in small things said and done
Not in this illusion
I’ve waited for so long now
In this state of confusion

This love won’t last too long
If this is how we’ll go on
There’s nothing in between us
But still we’re far apart
You can say you’re sorry
But still you’ve broken my heart

This love won’t last too long
If this is how we’ll go on
There’s nothing in between us
But still we’re far apart
You can say you’re sorry
But still you’ve broken my heart

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