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Saad, love doesnt always lead to pain. But I feel yours That is a nice song.

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Originally posted by ahhGucci@Apr 15th, 2004 - 2:12 am
Saad, love doesnt always lead to pain. But I feel yours That is a nice song.
its not really a ove or hate song, aahgucci....actually, its not even supposed to be felt at on the individual level...urgh...i dont know if im aking sense or not...
just re read it as if it's the whole world singing for the whole world.
everybody's kind of blaming everybody for the hurt.
imagine chorus

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im a beginner in poetry..i only write when the mood hits me. my poems suck, but there are hidden emotions in them,...and thats what matters, i guess.

final poem
i don't want to feel,
don't want to be trapped here,
you can make it all stop.
just the pull of your hand,
i'd feel the familiar touch,
which i have suffacted for.
but your hand is holding someone else,
leading her into the field of flowers.
as you turn around, and your eyes lock with mine,
i can almost see the uncertainty.
but i am mistaken..fooled again.
now, there isn't anymore crying.
no answer.
just dripping.
drip
drip
drip
there goes another life, unnoticed.
and all she wanted was to be loved.


goodbye
out of the sea, both of us have been chosen
to flow downstream, down the long river bend.
there've been frigid times when the river turned frozen,
but it always moved on, managing to mend.

the storms and the rain sometimes caused over flowing,
still, all this bad weather was presently gone.
and even at times when the sun wasn't glowing,
the river would stop, and wait until dawn.

yet, intergrity could not fight god's power
the river was ought to take to seperate ways.
every bend, every fall, every day, every hour
it always recalls foregone, blissful days.

even when seperated, it's still much adhere,
as it is one whole...one vast, pensive tear.

sorry for the pessimism

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Such amazing work from you both. I would love to hear your poem sung saad.
Both very melancholy...

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crystalized, your second poem is really beautiful.

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sonnet no. 10

to look upon the burning sky
with the memory of ever being loved.
but the sweet memory lingers still
of the times i stood high on loves hill.
all but a distant memory now
i would think, or should i even--
birds sang then, they still do
the morning dew fell from the tips of wet leaves then,
it still does
all was the same, it still is
i would think, or should i even--


i wrote this like 3 years ago...its really nothing..

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Have you ever tried setting any of your poetry to music saad? You really should...

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Originally posted by purplelucrezia@Apr 16th, 2004 - 1:01 am
Have you ever tried setting any of your poetry to music saad? You really should...
i would love to.....but i dont know how to make, play or write music....so im at a loss....nor do i know anyone who will do it for me....at least not for free

but i did tell you, right? that a guy's actually bought one of my 'very pop' song?!? he'll release it in a few months! he's a well known singer down here so...

i'll post more soon...

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Can't wait to see them! It's wonderful how talented everyone here is...

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Originally posted by faust@Apr 15th, 2004 - 11:39 am
crystalized, your second poem is really beautiful.
thanks i wrote it after my best friend whom i've known for 7 years moved away back to estonia. still haven't seen her since she left (december).
separation is awful.

i love your poems, saad. i wish i could transfer some of my poems into music, however, even though i do sing, i am really bad at writing songs, and such. ahh..shame..cuz i love music and poetry combined..

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I put one of my poems to music once. It was pretty bad, but fun to do.

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I cannot write with my mind like this. Soon, I promice.

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Whenever the sun shines its warming rays
On the hottest of the summer days
Where people mingle and have some fun
You'll always be that remainder of one.

When the work load is the lightest
When the friendships are the tightest
The relaxation has begun
Yet there's still that remainder of one.

The population's always odd
So you continue with your façade
Take that number, divide it by two
To your dismay, the remainder is you.

People die in pairs, you see
Attached by their love to a certain degree
One may still breathe, "But for whom?" he thinks
Even in this case, your predicament stinks.

Dead inside; alone forever
It's not your fault, you're cute and clever
Aren't you used to living this hell?
You've been doing it since you were a single cell!

You've thought about the ways to cope
By watching porn or slipping rope
Sure you'll get to f*** the b****
Just don't expect her to find her niche...

So at the end, you're in your room
Your soul mate is your impending doom
Sucks to be you, nothing can be done
You'll live and die as a remainder of one.

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thanks purple and crystalized!!!
and nice work too, nader and crystalized


here's another...i'm actually digging them out of my old old files


“Perfect Moment”

The life is draining from the eyes along with
The tears that once seemed so hard to lose
The whole day is a blunder with the
Longing and remembrance of the perfect moment passed
Spend all my time crying for the things I’ve lost along the way
The bag full of dreams stolen
Not worthy of the hopes I once possessed
There was no time for moments of happiness
Always for sadness, grief, and life
Let me see bliss as they call it
Though I don’t know what it feels like
Let me live let me live the perfect moment
Smell the sweet fragrance of being and
Feel the soft blows of wind
When I fly above the horizon
Looking back at the perfect moment passed
I will pray I have always prayed
But my secret psalms don’t seem to make the difference
I so long to make
And the emotions of an insatiated man dance through my veins
I’m waiting I’m waiting for the perfect moment
With the longing and remembrance of the perfect moment passed
But in the end, all that is truly mine
Is my tears
The tears that once seemed so hard to lose
Now all I have left is tears

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Felt like doing free thought writing today....

"Wish you Knew"

Time and time again,
I keep falling back in love with you.
But you have no clue how much I care
How I wish you only knew.

It’s stupid of me to keep having
This infatuated crush on you.
You’re taken by someone
So I should go and look for someone new.

Plus it would be just a fling
IF you ever gave me a chance
I know how many girls you’ve been with
I won’t even last a glance.

I hope your happy with your girlfriend
Maybe she’ll be the one to change you ways.
For once maybe stay with one girl
And maybe love her too I say.

So I guess this is a goodbye
I need to look for a man that’s true
But even as I say I won’t love you
I still wish you only knew.

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