I really like the styling, the setting and the relaxed mood. But the overload of text ruins it. That orangey red doesn't suit the shot imo .
It would look so much better with less text and a different font colour. I appreciate the fact that it's not a reprint though.
'Mon amour, je sais que tu m'aimes aussi, tu as besoin de moi, tu as besoin de moi dans ta vie,
tu ne peux vivre sans moi et je mourrerai sans toi. Je tuerai pour toi'