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Join Date: Dec 2005
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Wow... I just typed a post that got deleted.
Anyway, I'm kicking off the writing sharing. I wrote this a few months ago when I was in a piss with Girlfriend magazine for various reasons. Reading back over it, it's very short and bad, but I'd love some opinions etc.
Don't be too harsh, I'm just a little kid!
OK so I find that the first paragraph has too many questions. I can see what you're getting at but it just doesn't work for me.
Also, there are grammatical errors.
Personally I agree with what you are saying but I don't find the article particularly original. And to answer your question; go to a big newsagency and check out alternative magazines. When I lived in Sydney I liked RUSSH and Zen, I dunno if they're available in NZ!
Sorry I don't want to seem harsh but with stuff like this, I reckon being honest is best. Good luck!!
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