There's not really anything I could point out as terribly wrong - but I don't get a good feeling from these ads. It's as if... all the elements in the ad don't sit right with each other. The fake snow, the lighting, the stopped-in-time poses, it looks like it was done on a budget of $300 and the model's not happy because she'll not be seeing any of the cash, not after they deduct the funds for the hire of the glider.