Nice shots, but one would expect that from Max Mara because it's Max Mara.
I can't help but think that EJG honestly said to the models "what Meisel has told you to do, do that here". It's uninspiring, droll and of all the things you copy of Meisel's, you choose the most generic of his generic outputs. If I'm going to reference a photographer in any way, I'm going straight to more original sources like Steichen, Horst, Lee Miller, Beaton and even figures like Weegee, Burke-White and Brassai to get started (films... now that's a resource few use nowadays too as a reference).
But EJG is the Jacquemus of fashion photography so what else can one expect.