Hi Kitty,
Sorry was gone when you posted your first shoot ... but this second one is quite good for a beginner. Since you asked for feedback here are my thoughts on this one ....
The plusses:
First ... you are working with a good photographer ... congratulations! That, in itself is very hard to do, when you are new. Next, I see a theme here ... sporty wear in grey. black, navy ... with a small touch of jewelry for the unexpected ... a counterbalance. And the jewelry is obvious, but not overdone. Good choices.
Place for improvement:
Wrinkles ... all over the place. And it does not look deliberate (like some of the stores like Hollister do, where they crumple and roll up everything) ... it looks like you did not take the time to steam them. As a stylist ... that is your first job .. to make sure the clothes are camera ready.
But overall ... I'm impressed! Good job.