OK ... I'm back.
Here's one other thought:
If this is a multi-day presentation, then I would change the order of one section so it flows a little better. I think that section 5, about color and pattern belongs right after #2 (Does This Make Me Look Fat?). Depending on what you want to cover, it actually could be part of #2. eg: The most important use of color and pattern is to enhance assets and to camouflage flaws. But it could remain a separate section, if you are delving into the "mood" and other people's perceptions about your personality, based on color and pattern.
Congrats on being invited to present. I have a couple of thoughts, then I have to leave .... but may return later.
Seems to me that it's a lot for a very short presentation, even over two days. Way too much to cover, in my opinion. I think you need to drastically cut
And I think that maybe you have three different topics there. The first is how to dress to flatter your body type ... and the second is how to build a wardrobe and, according to your post .... the most important part would be how to dress to impress on a job interview. Yes, they are all related, but I think that the first two parts are not necessary if your topic is dressing for success/dressing to impress on the job.
So, pick two ... and focus more. I suggest that it be dress for your body type ... and dress for an interview and for the job you want. And don't get into building a whole wardrobe ... just because that can be very dry and also a bit intimidating.
I love the idea of mannequins ... a great visual aid! The color wheel may be a bit too complex ... it's art theory. Other visual aids like before and after photos showing different colors on the same person, might be better and easier to envision what you are trying to get across.
ETA: perhaps I'm reading this wrong ... maybe it's a multi day course, not just two days? If that's the case, my advice actually isn't that helpful and I think you are on track.
Thank you SO much BetteT for your advice and congratulations! You are correct it is a two day presentation. The coordinators wanted to give me an hour on the first day and a booth on the second day, which they are still shooting for given the audience. However, as it stands now I may not have that hour so I will plan accordingly. I agree that wardrobe building could be cut down and I could bring up some of those points throughout the presentation and that dressing professionally and for your body are the most important parts. I will probably just mention the places where the clothes came from and books for further reading on separate slides for them to refer to later.
I'm thinking of using the mannequins the second day so that could eliminate the need for the color wheel especially if I provide before/after or compare/contrast images the first and second day and combining section 5 with 2 for brevity's sake.
Now I'm on to looking for good images to illustrate my points. Again, thank you so much!