If the styling wasn't such a mess, and some of the looks were pulled back in terms of layering, there's a decent collection in here somewhere. Omit that last look as well, kind of came out of nowhere.
But take look 6 with the green skirt. Get rid of the tufts, make the sweater more fitted and keep the shirt, tuck it all into the waist and then you have a better look. Take of those face coverings on the others, rid of the ushankas, and the looks that have more than one jacket can be turned into two looks. All too excessive for the sake of being excessive.
Mind you, this does feel very LFW. Suppose that's an okay start to their "week" then?