hm, not bad. it was fine. the biggest thing is: edit, edit, edit. there were about 10 looks, including that random red one, that didn't need to be there at or ever. he had a good flow going, soon disturbed with throwaway filler ideas. quality not quantity.
the corset dresses could've been horns. this easily could've been and angels and demons inspired collection. whatever changes he made be it person, skillset, or thought, he should continue with it.