I like the close up shots. I'm always drawn to a compelling close cropped shot...it's gone out of fashion, with everyone in favor of dull, lifeless full body shots, instead. But a tight crop like this always reads as more dynamic, more glamorous and reads more "fashion" to me. It's like classic Tom Ford Gucci advertising. But I get that you don't see the clothes in full, so the suits likely don't love it.
Which leads me to the full image of the nightclub moment...just doesn't do anything for me. Oh well. Should have just stuck with the portraits.