hmm...i think i actually like the other model more...
but it's hard to tell from only one shot...
fyi-a 'story'...should usually be four to six pages...
for practical reasons...
you want 'spreads' in your book... a page on each side....front and back..
so even numbers work best...

four is usually enough and more than six can be boring...
*it's also usually a good idea to shoot at least one more than you think you need ...
because there is usually one that just isn't as strong as the rest...
and then you can drop that one...