I found Harry's march to death touching as well. To be honest, I think he should have died, given a one-time chance to go back, complete his destiny by destroying Voldemort and then joining Dumbledore in King's Cross
The ending should have been with Harry rejoining the ones he loved most (parents, Sirius, Lupin) and the epilogue when the trio meets in the afterworld. (like a hundred years from now

)
Don't yell at me for wanting a depressing ending

but I just wish it would have been less cliched because JKR destroyed all barriers of "children's" books when she wrote Harry Potter. She truly wrote a series that people of all ages can enjoy.
Okay now, short review from me.
The good
1) I felt for the most part, the deaths were very well done. I know some people felt she didn't go into Lupin and Tonks death (and I just wish I knew how they died) but the way she wrote it (looking "pale and peaceful" really broke my heart because they died together.
The fact that Percy threw himself over Fred's body was just so gut-wrenching, the fact that he knew his brother was already dead but in way in hell was he going to let him get hurt even after that.
2) Harry's march toward death. Most people liked them part and I am no different, probably the most brilliant chapter in this novel. If I hadn't known the ending before hand, I would have thought that would have been it for Harry
Oh, and who can forget him whispering
"I am about to die"
I just about lost it and started bawling
3) I felt Luna's character was very well done on this one. She was just as dreamy as she used to be but her spirit was utilized to strengthen Harry as opposed to the last few books where she was used for comic relief.
4) Snape's relationship with Lily. Yes, I knew it all along because JKR used 'love' as a theme in this novel but it was nice to see that it really was true. I really liked the part where Snape produces a patronus and it was a doe.
Dumbledore:
"After all this time?'
Snape:
"Always"
5) Harry's time alone with Hermione. Yes, I a delusional H/HR fan but in any case, the graveyard scene was very sweet.
6) I loved Dumbledore in this book, the fact that he is not flawless, that he is human and has made mistakes.
Overall, most of the book was good. Yes, some part was a bit rushed by the good parts OUTWEIGHT

the bad ones.
The bad
1) There were a couple of inconsistencies in that left me


Where the hell did that come from? I find that Harry seems to be consistently forgetting things in this novel. There were a couple of plot holes that were unexplained as well.
2) Some parts were very rushed and I just wished Snape had died a more heroic death. Something very dramatic like throwing his body over Harry's when the snake as about to strike or something

I felt he deserved a better death than that
3) Um...where was Harry when Hermione was getting tortured? Ron was sobbing his head off. I felt that Harry didn't feel enough emotions when Hermione was getting tortured. Yes, he was trying to get help but....I just felt he didn't care as much as he should. If it had been my best friend that was going through such pain, I probably would have fainted.
4) The last two hocruxes went by VERY fast. Ron and Hermione came back and it was like 'TRA LA LA, we went down into the Chamber of Secret, stabbed the thing and came flouncing back' I was like "SINCE WHEN WAS IT SO EASY TO GET INTO COS? IT WAS LOST FOR DECADES"
And since when did imitating "hissy noises" constitute as Parseltongue?
The Ugly
GINNY.
I need not state my opinions that her character has been badly developed by JK and her transition from a "desperate loser who had to go out with Neville just to go to the Yule Ball" to some kind of a hot goddess that all the Hogwarts Boys pined for was non-existant.
Overall, GINNY as a character was very WTF for me

Even when she went to the Ministry with Harry in Order of the Phoenix, she didn't risk herself for him. She never has shown that she cared for him exceedingly. I'm not sure if it's just me but I felt that Ginny was tempting Harry more with lust than with love.
Before Harry leaves to find Hocruxes, what does she give him "A long searing Kiss" so he can remember her if he's tempted by Veelas? Wtf? Pretty damn childish to me when Ron and Hermione pretty much promised to follow Harry even if it means death.
Overall, I don't
mind the notion of Harry+Ginny if she had only taken more time to develop Ginny or if she had written more scenes with them alone.
The epilogue was pretty decent until it came to an abrupt end.
Now that was NOT a short review

In ten years, I hope to see ALBUS SEVERES POTTER AND THE GREEN HORNED LAMP
