Hi Derek and Welcome to tFS!
I'm certainly not one to critique the technical aspects of anyone's photography since I'm not a trained photographer myself ... but you've got an edgy fashion vibe to your work that I like. Nice work!
But ... I have to say that I find the site itself a bit distracting and hard to get to the images. Then I didn't see the scroll bar right away, so it took a few times looking at differnt numbers to notice that there was more than one picture there.
I've been told by many people ... agents, photographers, art directors ... that the people that hire won't take any time on a complicated flash site ... they don't have time or the patience. So they usually just move onto the next photographer. I've heard that they like thumbnails so they can quickly review what is on the site and then easily pull up any images that interest them.
Just food for thought, since you asked for feedback.