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Originally posted by Sephora_Socialite@Jun 14th, 2004 - 2:06 pm
Did this a few years ago and I found it today. :wacko: I gave up on slam poetry long ago...actually lately all poetry.

Nothing Girl

I may not be the prettiest, I may not be the most athletic,
You may look and think, “How pathetic.”
I may not be on the social mountaintops,
Which seem to you, the world.
You may look and think, what a nothing girl.

So I tried to fit in,
To be to you a something.
Instead of some type of nothing.
I conformed my mind to be a twit.
Bragged about celebrities I know And see.
Became a diluted, censored me.

I already did and said what makes you twirl.
Now I’m not a nothing, but a liar girl.
You said I don’t know who, I don’t live there
That now I think I’m better,
Because of the designers I wear.

It’s not my fault.
You were the one who made me
Because you were the one who ignored interior
For what you wanted to see.

Now I know not to care, don’t you see that you are blinded.
By being robots, by being trend minded.
You ignore the interior and care about only your outer self.
When you’re old, that’s gone, then you got nothing left.

So if you think I’m nothing, that’s okay with me,
Because I got a heart and a mind
And that’s something to me.
darling...a whole different side of the girl we know... :flower: :heart:
 
Courtesy of the public transit system...

Rain, by M. Litovitz
Do you hear the rain?
I want to turn off the computer
and call to tell you
how it is raining
in the green center of the day,
late afternoon
thundering open
like heartbreak
like we imagine
but you are another illusion-
so I keep on typing
 
not my words...but i thought appropriate to sephora's post...



the stars have not dealt me the worst they could do
my pleasures are plenty my troubles are two

but oh my two troubles they reave me of rest...
the brain in my head and the heart in my breast... :blush: :innocent:
 
That was a mighty strange poem, purple...I'm still thinking about it know...I like it - it's unfussy, it has an almost sponateneous quality...

More stuff courtesy of the fine-folk at AQA...this is one of my favourite poems as well as it happens (shame we don't study it really):

My last duchess

Ferrara

That's my last Duchess painted on the wall,
Looking as if she were alive. Icall
That piece a wonder, now: Frà Pandolf's hands
Worked busily a day, andthere she stands.
Will't please you sit and look at her? I said
"Frà Pandolf" by design, for never read
Strangers like you that pictured countenance,
The depth and passion of its earnest glance,
But to myselfthey turned (since none puts by
The curtain I have drawn for you, but I) 10
And seemed as they would ask me, if they durst,
How such a glance came there; so, not the first
Are you to turn and ask thus. Sir, 'twas not
Her husband's presence only, called that spot
Of joy into the Duchess' cheek: perhaps
Frà Pandolf chanced to say "Her mantle laps
Over my Lady's wrist too much," or "Paint
Must never hope to reproduce the faint
Half-flush that dies along her throat": such stuff
Was courtesy, she thought, and cause enough 20
For calling up that spot of joy. She had
A heart--how shall I say?--too soon made glad,
Too easily impressed; she liked whate'er
She looked on, and her looks went everywhere.
Sir, 'twas all one! My favour at her breast,
The dropping of the daylight in the West,
The bough of cherries some officious fool
Broke in the orchard for her, the white mule
She rode with round the terrace--all and each
Would draw from her alike the approving speech, 30
Or blush, at least. She thanked men,--good! but thanked
Somehow--I know not how--as if she ranked
My gift of a nine-hundred-years-old name
With anybody's gift. Who'd stoop to blame
This sort of trifling? Even had you skill
In speech--(which I have not)--to make your will
Quite clear to such an one, and say, "Just this
Or that in you disgusts me; here you miss,
Or there exceed the mark"--and if she let
Herself be lessoned so, nor plainly set 40
Her wits to yours, forsooth, and made excuse,
--E'en then would be some stooping, and I choose
Never to stoop. Oh sir, she smiled, no doubt,
Whene'er I passed her; but who passed without
Much the same smile? This grew; I gave commands;
Then all smiles stopped together. There she stands
As if alive. Will't please you rise? We'll meet
The company below, then. I repeat,
The Count your master's known munificence
Is ample warrant that no just pretence 50
Of mine for dowry will be disallowed;
Though his fair daughter's self, as I avowed
At starting, is my object. Nay, we'll go
Together down, sir. Notice Neptune, though,
Taming a sea-horse, thought a rarity,
Which Claus of Innsbruck cast in bronze for me!

Robert Browning
 
I loved that poem, I have so many things to say on it, but alas, I'm no intelectual ;)
 
Thanks guys.... :flower:

lately though I've been giving up on writing because of some major writers block. :( its been driving me nuts and even simple jingles for my greeting cards have been trouble to write.

BTW great poems everyone..I've been reading em ...

Prince LOL sorry you couldn't write about your line spacing, but it is very interesting...You too Ahh. ;)

Saad...you haven't posted recently, I'd like to see more from you. I've enjoyed reading yours so far.

Softie that lil poem is very nice. Me likes.
 
aw thanks sephora :blush:

herres something i dug out just for you:)

(ok, this isnt something ive shown to anyone because its too thick...if you knwo what i mean...dont pay much attention :ninja: ....i'll type the new ones i have on paper and shwo em to you guys soon ;) )


Hate; thief of love

At some disputed barricade I stand,
Not quite sure of what to do, where to look
The vague line scratched across the palm of my hand,
Holding back the potentials of my creed,
My dreams held captive in human pride

Why, hate; you subtle thief of love
Can you not let me laugh amid my brothers?
Let hold hands and cross the river of pain,
To rest under the shady tree of love
And one day face the rapture of being together
And live in bliss forever and ever
 
okay, read theis when youre doing nothing else.
it requires that...

i did this as an ode to the parents---




“You wouldn’t know”

(female)
Somebody laughs when his mother cries
The mask of ignorance is a blend of perfectness
He would think, but then the moon would laugh
So you think you would enter the gates?
Wipe the tears, and you may be worthy of thought
(male)
Somebody laughs when his father cries
But you still wouldn’t try
The mask of ignorance is a blend of perfectness
You still think, let the moon laugh
(chorus)
You’ve seen the world in a perfect dance
You’ve seen people live through a mystical trance
You’ve seen the highest peak of the highest mountain glow
You’ve seen the deepest waters of the deepest river flow
And you think that all makes you a big man
Someone worthy of the life’s blissful span
But you wouldn’t know
But you wouldn’t know
(female)
That there are people in this world
Who live and die for their mother’s pride
For that one look of satisfaction in her tired eyes
Seeking perfection in her innocent delight
(male)
That there are people in this world
Who seek to change their worlds if their fathers may
Find the pleasure in his son swayed by his long lost dream
For that one look of satisfaction in his tired eyes
Seeking perfection in his innocent delight
(chorus)
But you’ve seen the world in a perfect dance
You’ve seen people live through a mystical trance
You’ve seen the highest peak of the highest mountain glow
You’ve seen the deepest waters of the deepest river flow
And you think that all makes you a big man
Someone worthy of the life’s blissful span
But you wouldn’t know
But you wouldn’t know

Somebody dies when his mother cries
The tears of her eyes make him weak inside
And the broken heart wonders if it can ever abide

And that somebody dies when his father cries
The tears of his eyes make him weak inside
And the broken heart wonders if it can ever abide
And the broken heart wonders if it can ever abide
 
:clap: Yay Sedi!!!!


I found something crumbled in my jacket pocket...here it is...funny I never recalled writting this..

"Love is a Flaw"

Tell me what I'd have to change.
What type of person would I have to be.
To be deep into your arms,
For you to just look at me.

Do I have to climb the highest cliff?
Cry the Nile upon the floor?
Jump over fire, step barefoot over broken glass -
would I have to do more?

Can you take me as I am,
with my issues and my flaws?
Can you hug me close to your chest
without a hesitation or a pause?

Must I change for you to love me
do I have to figure what I lack, whats my flaws?
Must I be your perfect ideal
Is loving you worth my being, worth the cause?

Can you be less about exterior,
And see this is a heart of gold
Filled to the brim with caring for you
If you do then just reach and break the mold.

I wish you could see things different
You see I can be who I am, not what you want me to be
I don't compromise myself for one person
Yet this is what I see-

You look deep into my loving eyes, and say the words I long to hear
Kiss me, and say my name, please hold me near.
Do I ask for wishes that could never come true?
Is my destruction, my greatest fault, that I can't help loving you?
 
Originally posted by saad@Jun 15th, 2004 - 12:09 am
okay, read theis when youre doing nothing else.
it requires that...

i did this as an ode to the parents---
Honestly, saad- you should get those made into songs, if you haven't already. And I mean this really seriously, they seem like they totally need that. Not that they're not wonderful already, but it'd kind of complete them.
It's actually not that difficult to get done either, it doesn't have to be fully proffessional or anything. Just maybe ask around and collect a couple of your friends with good voices. If they have any vocal training, they'll usually be able to finally put it together fairly easily. I got that done for one of my songs and just recorded it on a simple tape. And, it made a massive, massive difference. My piece wasn't even particularly good, but when it was actually put to music by someone who knew what they were doing-
:woot:
I would definately give it a try. :flower:
 
Originally posted by PrinceOfCats@Jun 14th, 2004 - 4:43 pm
That was a mighty strange poem, purple...I'm still thinking about it know...I like it - it's unfussy, it has an almost sponateneous quality...
I thought so, it reminded me a bit of Imagist poetry. Sort of like pieces of thoughts and just focusing on brief impressions. I enjoyed reading yours as well, although it's not of the style I typically like.
 
Originally posted by purplelucrezia+Jun 15th, 2004 - 9:05 pm--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (purplelucrezia @ Jun 15th, 2004 - 9:05 pm)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-saad@Jun 15th, 2004 - 12:09 am
okay, read theis when youre doing nothing else.
it requires that...

i did this as an ode to the parents---
Honestly, saad- you should get those made into songs, if you haven't already. And I mean this really seriously, they seem like they totally need that. Not that they're not wonderful already, but it'd kind of complete them.
It's actually not that difficult to get done either, it doesn't have to be fully proffessional or anything. Just maybe ask around and collect a couple of your friends with good voices. If they have any vocal training, they'll usually be able to finally put it together fairly easily. I got that done for one of my songs and just recorded it on a simple tape. And, it made a massive, massive difference. My piece wasn't even particularly good, but when it was actually put to music by someone who knew what they were doing-
:woot:
I would definately give it a try. :flower: [/b][/quote]
thanks purple :blush:

i rememebr you said the same thing last time...which means i really should find someone and make them sing these...


and how can i ever forget My Last Duchess!!!
i had to do a 2 page piece on it..which ultimately took the fun out of it!
you guys read it in Rhodri Jones's book too right? :rolleyes:
 
I've actually been writing a bit more poetry lately (boredom?), so I might post a bit later. When it's a bit fixed up, preferably. ;)
 
:flower: :wub: I love this thread! I am crazy for poetry. Creative Writing was one of my minors in college, so this is up my alley! :)

Here's something I wrote a few years ago. It's called,

Dirty Little Game

Take your time.
Do it right.
You're gonna love it --
The way it's gonna feel,
The rush you're gonna get.
Wow, look at you...
You're already sweating.
Nervous, are ya?
Youre heart is thumping out of your chest,
I can see it.
I'm the one who should be nervous... not you.
You getting that crazy feeling yet?
Hey, don't worry about me ---
Remember, it was my idea in the first place.
Don't even think twice about it.
It'll be all right.
No one's going to find out.
I promise I won't tell --- you know I won't.
Once it's over with, you can leave.
I won't mind.
C'mon --look at me.
There ya go, nice and slow now.
A little bit more.
Oh yes.
You look ready.
Your hands look ready.
Your body looks ready.
You're in position now.;
You ready?
I watch you place your hands on it ---
I watch you shake a little and raise it in the air.
I can see it looking straight at me --- raised and ready.
I watch you squeeze your eyes shut.
I watch your finger ---
I laugh madly and watch no more.
_______________________________________________________

one more... this one's called

ice

by its
intensity
soothed
so cold so
fresh so
chillingly
alive in my
mouth my
lips, oh
every inch
of my lips
my aching
stomach
coated with
coolness
captures
the drips
smaller
and
smaller it melts
on my
tongue
decreasing dissolving
disappearing
my medicine
my
mind my
misery dying
along with it
the only
thing left
will be
the memory
 
Here's a little something I wrote for my creative writing class. It's called Cast Away- but I'm not sure if I like it as the title anymore.

"Cast Away"


She led him
Urgently
Up the softly carpeted stairs
Her finger entwined
In his belt loop
Gently tugging him
Along

Her room was dark
Flecked with
The red bordello glow
Of ten tea lights
Drowning in their own blood
A black lacy brassiere
Decorated a worn crucifix
The cold wintry air
Pulsated through their bodies

He gawked at the sight
While she deftly unbuckled
His tattered leather belt
Standing on her tiptoes
To breathe hotly into the skin behind his ear

She sidled to the window
Glancing over her shoulder
That little smirk pursed on her delicate lips

She led him onto the roof
Resting herself against the cold gritty chimney
Gripping the shingles with her elvin feet
A toe specked with pale pink polish caressed a spot of moss
Invading her territory

She drew him in by his shirt collar
Nipping at his lower lip
Drawing his essence out
Gyrating in movements foreign to him
She forgot about the cold

Fifteen minutes later
He left without a word
Shimmying down the trellis
His red Trans Am puttered down
The quiet suburban street
A few seconds later

She stared at the fresh scrapes
Along her thighs
The blood was creeping onto the hem
Of her stark white nightgown
Her white blonde hair
Stirred by the icy wind
Floated like a halo
Around her face

She fished for a cigarette
From her stash behind the chimney

Taking a long draw
She exhaled slowly
And let a delicate ring of smoke
Float into the void
 
Here goes... :ninja:
The Dragon Lady

she hovers above us
an example of mankind's monstrosities
Thus
the Dragon Lady.

they said she was sent from hell
that the "dragon lady" label,
was but an understatement
a label to make her more..
endearing..

I found their chilly words
True indeed
That fateful day
when her eyes bored into me

They were eyes of pure evil
channeling nothing but cold malevolence
sending shivers down my spine
Terrorising my dreams


The time has flown, and countless years passed
But that venomous gaze
Is still imprinted harshly
Painfully
as if it were carved into my mind
with a sturdy knife

Oh Dragon Lady
why can I never forget you ?
Why do you haunt me so?

:lol:
 
De Profundis

Oh why is heaven built so far,
Oh why is earth set so remote?
I cannot reach the nearest star
That hangs afloat.
I would not care to reach the moon,
One round monotonous of change;
Yet even she repeats her tune
Beyond my range.
I never watch the scatter'd fire
Of stars, or sun's far-trailing train,
But all my heart is one desire,
And all in vain:
For I am bound with fleshly bands,
Joy, beauty, lie beyond my scope;
I strain my heart, I stretch my hands,
And catch at hope.

-Christina Rossetti
 

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